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P. 1
The first misconception is that world’s population growS evenly. (Explanation: Not true /only remains high in developing countries /some countries have to restrict birth rate (China) / others have even introduced birth incentives (Russia) => incorrect to talk about the issue in a global scale)
The first misconception is that world’s population growS evenly. (Explanation: Not true /only remains high in developing countries /some countries have to restrict birth rate (China) / others have even introduced birth incentives (Russia) => incorrect to talk about the issue in a global scale)
P. 2
The second misconception is that dissymmetry between population increase and production capacity would cause shortage of food. (Explanation: Not true / technology allows to increase productivity of the same land/ trade / up to 30% of agricultural products go to waste => better distribution system needed to prevent “dire consequences”)
The second misconception is that dissymmetry between population increase and production capacity would cause shortage of food. (Explanation: Not true / technology allows to increase productivity of the same land/ trade / up to 30% of agricultural products go to waste => better distribution system needed to prevent “dire consequences”)
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