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[od1n]

• to have (no) aptitude towards something

Seems like it is an incorrect phrase. I believe it should be attitude towards or aptitude for

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Усложняем задание.

Тема - Should schoolchildren be taught arts?

You need to decide whether to support the case 'for' or the case 'against' (choose one side of the argument only though concessions are OK!) but you must use all of the words from the list below.

• to become disheartened
• to judge / judgement
• relevant / to have (no) relevance
• encourage / encouragement
• to have (no) aptitude for something
• critical / crucial/essential/vital - choose the one you like
• capture one's interest
• to appeal to
• elitist

[<кирилл>]

Yup

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Ready for another challenge?

[Maimiti_Isabella]

А можно мне еще раз? Выделенное жирным исправил.

In today’s dynamic world, it is immensely important to have a good command of a foreign language even if a person is not going to master it as a professor or a translator. This is especially true for English as the dominance language. One of the reasons is that people can draw on their knowledge of English to encompass worldwide political as well as economic problems watching different international channels in tandem with local ones. Another factor, which underpins the importance of learning foreign languages, is that people who know a foreign language can secure their economic future because they have an opportunity to find a job at an international corporation and have greater salary than those who work for local companies. This is why many people seek to learn foreign languages; however, it is quite difficult for some of them and, consequently, they deviate from their original plan of actions.

Much better now.

[NortT]

Никого не забыла? Всем ответила?

А можно мне еще раз? Выделенное жирным исправил.

In today’s dynamic world, it is immensely important to have a good command of a foreign language even if a person is not going to master it as a professor or a translator. This is especially true for English as the dominance language. One of the reasons is that people can draw on their knowledge of English to encompass worldwide political as well as economic problems watching different international channels in tandem with local ones. Another factor, which underpins the importance of learning foreign languages, is that people who know a foreign language can secure their economic future because they have an opportunity to find a job at an international corporation and have greater salary than who work for local companies. This is why many people seek to learn foreign languages; however, it is quite difficult for some of them and, consequently, they deviate from their original plan of actions.

[z11aalex]

Никого не забыла? Всем ответила?

nope, but you are killing me softly

[Тина]

Good try!
In consequence --> as a consequence
between vs. among
for (many, several, certain, obvious, etc) reasons

Thank you very much!
I'm happy!

[Тина]

Good try!
In consequence --> as a consequence
between vs. among
for (many, several, certain, obvious, etc) reasons

Thank you very much!
I'm happy!

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Никого не забыла? Всем ответила?

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Ну как по мне разница такая: работа В интер. компании (a job (a noun) in an international corporation) и работать на местную контору (to work (a verb) for local companies). Но я намек понял, что тут что-то не то Очевидно, что в первом случае нужно at (по аналогии с to study at school). А во втором случае.. хм.. не знаю. Вот в словаре нашел, вроде тоже самое:
work for
He works for a law firm.

Да, верно. In - здание/место.
А в о стальном надо принять решение, либо at, либо for, так как в данном конкретном случае разницы нет.

This is why some parents seek their kids to be thought a foreign language. However, many children deviate from the parents’ plan and do not pay attention to language classes.

А в каком плане не пошла? Grammar, task response, coherence?

P.S. Сейчас заметил только, что не thought, а taught. Постоянно путаю, но думаю проблема не в этом была.

Эта часть вообще какая-то несуразная.

seek their kids to be tаught - простите, бессмыцлица. Проверьте значение и употребление глагола seek.
deviate from the parents’ plan - о каком плане идет речь. Согласитесь, обучение иностранному языку нельзя классифицировать в качестве 'плана'.

[shirly]

I'm confused...
Первые два предложения очень хорошие, а потом все пошло на 'понижение'.

Вы тут новенькая (правильно, не 'новенький'?), так что начнем с азов. Слова but, and, or являются союзами, поэтому они должны соединять части предложения: but vs. however.

... doesn't encompass just availability to secure person's economic future. Professional of any field - ????

Спасибо за фидбек!!!
Да, новенькая))

Я первые два предложения писала с уже сформулированной мыслью в голове. Дальше уже подгоняла, чтобы использовать оставшиеся слова... Видимо это сыграло роль.

Про союза поняла, буду изучать!

Professional of any field - ????
Тут видимо лучше Proffesionals in any field...
Ну и по смыслу, согласна, коряво получилось. Вроде сама говорю, что знание языков помогает укрепить не только финансовое положение. И тут же пишу про то, что специалисты любой направленности могут знакомиться с работами коллег глубже, если будут читать эти самые работы в оригинале. Но ведь углубление знаний по профессии тоже обеспечивает финансовую безопасность в какой-то степени...

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Можно к вам?
У меня только уровень так себе..., но я все же попробую)

Nowadays having a good command of foreign languages is an essential factor of successful person's life. Most of employers seek to hire a candidate who speaks English, the dominant language of our dynamic world, rather than one who speaks only their native language. But speaking foreign language doesn't encompass just availability to secure person's economic future. Professional of any field in order to master their knowledge can get to know with their foreign colleagues works deeper if they can read the original, not translated, writings. That was just two reasons why people shouldn't deviate from learning English or any other language.

I'm confused...
Первые два предложения очень хорошие, а потом все пошло на 'понижение'.

Вы тут новенькая (правильно, не 'новенький'?), так что начнем с азов. Слова but, and, or являются союзами, поэтому они должны соединять части предложения: but vs. however.

... doesn't encompass just availability to secure person's economic future. Professional of any field - ????

[Maimiti_Isabella]

Надеюсь вы не против если я все таки буду продолжать играть в игру, чтобы тренироваться в надежде что 10я или 20я попытка будет удачной)))

In dynamic society it is absolutely necessary to be aware of at least one foreign language. There is no doubt, that between all languages in the world, English language is domineering. Almost all people in the world seek to master Global language, but the majority of them deviate from studying it in many reasons. However, the most stubborn and hardworking students reach the goal and have a good command of English. It is obvious, that knowledge of international language helps to pursue an economic future. In consequence, students all over the world draw on tutor's lessons to encompass not only English grammar but also English fluency.

Good try!
In consequence --> as a consequence
between vs. among
for (many, several, certain, obvious, etc) reasons

[vok]

Wow.
Интересно было бы почитать Ваше эссе.
dynamic specialists - specialists - это 'ложный друг переводчика': professionals
generic teacher-oriented - generic здесь не подходит.

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