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Сообщение от Jason Bourne Посмотреть сообщениеЕсли пол ребенка не известен, то употребляется нейтральное it
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Сообщение от Ветерок Посмотреть сообщениеПодскажите пожалуйста а как выкручиваться в таких ситуациях с полом ? Я понимаю что ребенок он и мужского пола и женского может быть, как тогда правильнее написать то ? a child бла бла бла может улучшить his/her физическое состояние. Через slash что ли?
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There is a debatable argument about teaching arts in schools. I totally agree with this opinion because teaching arts to schoolchildren broaden their horizons and reveal them other aspects of education. During the arts classes, pupils are being encouraged to see and perceive things differently, which is a crucial skill that stimulates their creativity. On the other hand, according to judgment of some people, arts classes are not relevant to pupils who have aptitude for natural sciences. However, even children who feel appealing to math problems, that usually involve formal methods to tackle them, need to apply creativity in order to avoid being disheartened by their complexity. Hence, to master problem solving skills, schoolchildren need to be multifaceted educated. Moreover, arts discipline like painting, capture pupil's interest in artwork and imaginary illustration of usual objects.
elitist is missing
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Сообщение от Ветерок Посмотреть сообщениеПодскажите пожалуйста а как выкручиваться в таких ситуациях с полом ? Я понимаю что ребенок он и мужского пола и женского может быть, как тогда правильнее написать то ? a child бла бла бла может улучшить his/her физическое состояние. Через slash что ли?
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Сообщение от Ветерок Посмотреть сообщениеПодскажите пожалуйста а как выкручиваться в таких ситуациях с полом ? Я понимаю что ребенок он и мужского пола и женского может быть, как тогда правильнее написать то ? a child бла бла бла может улучшить his/her физическое состояние. Через slash что ли?
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеИ почему вы так настаиваете, что все дети должны быть мужского пола ('he')?
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеthat knowledge in this field is relevant to general education - не поняла...
Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеfor this part of study - не поняла...
Да уж, не всегда получается перестроить мозг на английский лад, особенно прикольно получилось с child. Прям какое-то гендерное неравенство
Спасибо за ценные замечания
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Сообщение от Jason Bourne Посмотреть сообщениеNowadays children often face the necessity of learning arts which results in somewhat becoming disheartened by the teaching process. I completely agree with the judgement that arts should be part of the school program.The main reason why learning arts can prove useful is that knowledge in this field is relevant to general education. Encouraging one’s child to learn arts increases his overall level of culture. Even if he has no aptitude for this part of study, it is absolutely vital to motivate him by any means possible.Moreover by learning arts the child can find his interest captured by some particular aspect, which appeals personally to him.To make it short I believe that teaching arts is unexpendable part of teaching process to help your child to become a member of elitist society.
Они становятся disheartened by the teaching или by learning process/
Совершенно непонятная для меня разбивка на абзацы.
Слишком много informal pronouns. И вообще я не поняла почему вы так беспокоитесь о моем ребенке
member of elitist society. - это все хорошо или плохо, быть member of elitist society?
that knowledge in this field is relevant to general education - не поняла...
for this part of study - не поняла...
И почему вы так настаиваете, что все дети должны быть мужского пола ('he')?
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Nowadays children often face the necessity of learning arts which results in somewhat becoming disheartened by the teaching process. I completely agree with the judgement that arts should be part of the school program.The main reason why learning arts can prove useful is that knowledge in this field is relevant to general education. Encouraging one’s child to learn arts increases his overall level of culture. Even if he has no aptitude for this part of study, it is absolutely vital to motivate him by any means possible.Moreover by learning arts the child can find his interest captured by some particular aspect, which appeals personally to him.To make it short I believe that teaching arts is unexpendable part of teaching process to help your child to become a member of elitist society.
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Сообщение от NortT Посмотреть сообщениеThere are some crucial reasons why youngsters should study arts even if it does not appeal to them.
Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who do not deal with arts. However, in order to encourage children to study arts, teachers should capture their interest. Moreover, teachers should not judge their learners strictly. In other case, young learners, especially ones who do not have aptitude for arts or relevant skills, might become disheartened about arts.
Secondly, pupils who study arts can understand the meaning of elitist pieces of arts. Why is it important? I don’t know. Actually, I don’t know how to use this word in such a context
kids - informal
judge their learners --> the learners (the idea is not developed anyway - why shouldn't they do this?)
have no aptitude for arts (sounds better as it's more formal)
unnecessary repetition of words/ideas:- Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who do not deal with arts. --> Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who are not.
- In other case, young learners, especially ones who do not have aptitude for arts or relevant skills, might become disheartened about arts --> In other case, young learners, especially the ones who do not have an aptitude for arts or relevant skills, might become disheartened.
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- Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who do not deal with arts. --> Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who are not.
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There are some crucial reasons why youngsters should study arts even if it does not appeal to them.
Firstly, kids who are taught arts have better imagination than those who do not deal with arts. However, in order to encourage children to study arts, teachers should capture their interest. Moreover, teachers should not judge their learners strictly. In other case, young learners, especially ones who do not have aptitude for arts or relevant skills, might become disheartened about arts.
Secondly, pupils who study arts can understand the meaning of elitist pieces of arts. Why is it important? I don’t know. Actually, I don’t know how to use this word in such a context
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеПростите, но тут мало что имеет смысл.
a specialist in arts - что это такое?
I appeal to add a new discipline - что это значит?
but don't make it an essential one. - похоже, что вы обращаетесь ко мне?
have an aptitude for artistry - что это такое? artistry это ближе по значению к 'артистичность'.
Exercising schoolmate's talent - т.е. один ребенок должен еxercisе talent своего / своей schoolmate?
etc
В общем, вам надо писать пока проще. Не пытайтесь создавать 'умные' предложния: это еще впереди. Главное для вас, я так понимаю, правильно выразить мысль использую простые предложения.
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениевыделенное красным непонятно
запятая не нужна
Я, как вы понимаете, все ошибки обсуждать здесь не буду. Этим вы должны заниматься с вашим tutor (надеюсь, что он/а у вас есть)
Спасибо огромное за то что вы делаете! Это уже много!
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Сообщение от shirly Посмотреть сообщениеNowadays, being a specialist in arts or even knowing more that the average person knows about arts considers as an elitist characteristic. One of the approaches to fill this gap is to teach arts in school. Because of all the doubts I have concerning this question I appeal to add a new discipline in school programs, but don't make it an essential one.
Those schoolchildren who have an aptitude for artistry can join the classes. Having talent and relevant education can help them to express themselves. Exercising schoolmate's talent will encourage to visit arts classes those who was not sure rather they want to learn about arts or not. And there is a high probability that new discipline will capture some of these children's interest. At the same time, the optionality of classes will provide children, who have no aptness for the arts, not to become dishearted by misjudgment.
a specialist in arts - что это такое?
I appeal to add a new discipline - что это значит?
but don't make it an essential one. - похоже, что вы обращаетесь ко мне?
have an aptitude for artistry - что это такое? artistry это ближе по значению к 'артистичность'.
Exercising schoolmate's talent - т.е. один ребенок должен еxercisе talent своего / своей schoolmate?
etc
В общем, вам надо писать пока проще. Не пытайтесь создавать 'умные' предложния: это еще впереди. Главное для вас, я так понимаю, правильно выразить мысль использую простые предложения.
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