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Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от MariaAn Посмотреть сообщениеWhen dwellers of rural area relocate to the Big Smoke they want to find an idyllic life. However, some years later, most of them feel themselves disappointed with an utopian idea of better life in megapolises.
On the one hand, living inside a flock of citizens has an uncomfortable conditions such as hustle and bustle everywhere: in shops, in public transport, in hospitals and other instances. Moreover, permanent noise has a negative impact to the nervous system and health in common. This can lead to increasing of DINKs family which is a disadvantage for a whole society. If employee had more opportunities for telecommuting, they would reduce a level of stress and improve their health.
--> rural dwellers
feel themselves - yuk! (just feel is good enough )
flock имеет совсем другое значение
И запомните на всю оставшуюся жизнь этого форума
to impact/affect/influence + object (transitive verbs)
to have (feel, experience, etc) an impact / effect / influence + on
common and general are not synonyms
Остальное комментировать не буду. Ошибок очень много, но они и ожидаемы.____________
Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от julyp Посмотреть сообщениеПохоже меня проглядели.____________
Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеОчень неплохо. Практически все слова употреблены правильно. Жалко, что для DINKs место не нашлось.
Проверьте как используется слово incline.
ill health - уже существительное с прилагательным, так что они само по себе самодостаточные
и откуда вы вот эту прелесть взяли: persons?
countryside пишется вместе
насчет incline мне показалось вроде подходит по смыслу, взято отсюда :incline
насчет ill health можно и так?... that discourage ill health from the idea ...
countryside- basic mistake
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насчет ill health можно и так?
... that discourage ill health from the idea ...____________
Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от julyp Посмотреть сообщениеSea change or tree change gains popularity in our days. People abandon city life and move to villages or sea coasts because there are no hustle and bustle in countryside. In addition, people enjoy peaceful, idyllic or even utopian life in countryside.
Of course, life in a village has minuses, for example, you may have difficulty with job searching. However many people may found telecommuting through the internet. Fewer and fewer circumstances prevent people from moving to the village these days. Everybody can relocate to village or sea cost now: young and old, families with children and DINK families. However, there are two categories of people who usually migrate to countryside. The first category is retirees and ill health people. The second one is people who want to rest from the big smoke; they usually shift to the coast.
Although there is urban sprawl nowadays, this sea change is becoming more popular than ever.
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'ill health' is not used correctly
Please re-visit the SVA issues in the 'there is / there are' sentences
Check out the meaning of the verb 'to rest'.____________
Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеAre we done?
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Сообщение от z11aalex Посмотреть сообщениеI think so, anyway I am keen to find out what's out there prepared for us____________
Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Сообщение от Maimiti_Isabella Посмотреть сообщениеAre we done?Step 1. 28.03.15 IELTS L6 R6 W6 S7
Step 2. 01.09.15 ANZSCO 233611 Process Engineer (mining)
Step 3 05.03.16 IELTS L7.5 R7 W7.5 S 7.5 (6.5->7.5), 21.05.16 L8.5, R8, W7.5, S6.5
Step 4 29.05.16 EOI NSW (55 points) Submitted
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The topic: education
- dated/ outdated
- marks oriented
- to face
- to respond to
- rapidly changing environment
- prescriptive
- teacher centred / teacher oriented
- vehemently
- creativity
- from cradle to grave
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Сообщение от bolo83всезнающая дама предпенсионного возраста, которая сама непонятно как попала в Австралию
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Great attention is devoted to education in our days. It influences human life from cradle to grave, that is why it is so important part of our life. Currently development of society and technology is accelerated, and this development affects education. In addition, a rapidly changing social environment does matter. Current educational methods become outdated and new modern methods appear. For example, there are people who vehemently object to teacher centred education. They usually support student-centered instruction. These types of education have both positive and negative sides.
In teacher centred education, the teacher talks or give prescription while the students listen. In this case, the students work alone, they learn to be independent. However, this type of education is marks oriented and do not learn to collaborate with other people.
In student-centered instruction, the students communicate with each other. They develop creativity and improve collaborative skills, the students ask questions and the instructor responds to their questions. This type of education prepares the student for adult life. When they face with problems, they will be able to solve them.Last edited by julyp; 12.09.2015, 15:55.Мяу.
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