Скажу спасибо всем, кто поможет поправить мое эссе .
PS. Пишет жена Марата, которая у нас паровоз. Результаты теста за райтинг неутешительные жду конструктивной критики.
PS. Пишет жена Марата, которая у нас паровоз. Результаты теста за райтинг неутешительные жду конструктивной критики.
Dangerous sports should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?
The problem of extreme sports has long been a subject of animated discussions amid many people. Some of them cannot imagine their lives without risks and adventures related to these kinds of sport whereas the rest do not believe in their reasonability and suggest the governments to prohibit them legally. In this essay, both sides of the issue will be considered before reaching any conclusion.
To begin with, there are certain sportsmen aspiring to adrenaline brought about by dangerous sports such as alpinism or car racing. According to their view, if they did not have an opportunity to master their skills in climbing or fast driving, they would lose their enthusiasm about life. Professionals and amateurs devote their time to trainings and competitions in order to brighten up their lives with novel impressions and feelings. Thus, it stands to reason that for particular group of individuals not only are these activities just sports but lifestyle.
There are, however, some doubts about safety of hazardous sports. They may cause injuries and traumas some of which may be incompatible with normal life. Moreover, sadly known cases of lethal outcomes in boxing rings or on Formula 1 tracks worry opponents of extreme sports. They hold the opinion that sport organizations should redeem and exclude some disciplines from championships and world cups. Thereby, it goes without saying that sport may threaten people’s health and life.
Taking into account all these substantial arguments, I may safely reach the conclusion that despite illusive benefits of fresh emotions and new experience for the sportsmen, dangerous sports seem too insecure and perilous for me, that is why they should be banned by the authorities.
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