У меня экзамен "на носу" вот и спрашиваю
Dear Maria,
I am writing to you to thank you and to tell you about my feelings and my thoughts.
I am writing to you to thank you and to tell you about my feelings and my thoughts.
Thank you for your wonderful present! (потому что от вас неформального письма хотели, подруге, а не возможному работодателю, которому надо оправдываться ,что вы письмо пишите). I'd like to tell you about (лучше вместо этого share) my thoughts and feelings with you! (вообще не очень понимаю смысл этого предложения, т.е. зачем оно, даже по-русски!).
I did not wait to receive a present from you so I was really surprised when a postman brought me a box with sender's address: Canada, Ontario, Toronto.
I wasn't expecting to receive a present from you, so I was really surprised when the postman brought me (delivered лучше) a box sent from Canada.
It is so nice to obtain it on my Birthday so thank you very much!
It was so nice to have it delivered on my birthday (зачем день рождения с большой буквы?). Thank you so very much! (второй раз благодарите, учитывая общее низкое количество слов, такое ощущение, что вам нечего больше сказать и вы ради этого повторяетесь чтобы уж как-то в магическую цифру 150 уложиться)
I have dreamt for a long time about the same watch and when I opened your present I was very enjoyed.
I had long dreamt of such a watch.
I had long dreamt of a watch like the one you sent me. (лучше)
When I opened your present, I was overjoyed!
This watch will be very useful for me because it will do for my suit so I could wear it at my job or in some events such as a wedding or a business meeting.
И ни единой запятой.Хотя это и не главное
This watch will probably become one of my favorites, since it matches my suit very well. I think I'll be able to wear it to work, including business meetings, or to different social functions, such as weddings.
I am very grateful to you for this wonderful present and I also would be very glad if you personally visit me on my Birthday!
Thanks once again for sending such a wonderful present. I hope you can visit me when my next birthday comes along!
Best wishes,
Michael
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