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Просьба проверить мое эссе. У меня большая проблема - не могу уложиться в 40 минут и получается слишком много слов. Как можно сократить эссе?
Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
The modern lifestyle allows us to choose where to live. Some people think that there are more advantages to live in the house but at the same time others claim that living in an apartment is more suitable for people. As for me, I agree that living in a house has more advantages compared with living in a block of flats. This will be analyzed by providing pros and cons of abovementioned statement.
First advantage is that in the house you do not have neighbors above or below your flat. For instance, friend of mine who is living in the apartment complained several months ago that his neighbors from the flat under him like to listen to the music loudly during the night. He asked them to not doing this and even called to the police several times but without any help. This example clearly shows that the family living in the separate house will definitely not have any troubles with noisy neighbors just from the other side of the wall. Quietness is a main reason why people prefer to live in the house.
The second advantage is that usually each separate house has its own land where you can spend a lot of time outside the room with activities such as sunbathing, cooking the meal, playing with children and pets, growing flowers. According to the survey, people who spend 4-5 hours on the nature each day have the better health in comparison with those who spend time mostly in the apartments. There are no doubts that people who live in the house with the garden have the chance to spend their time closer to the nature and this is the main reason why people prefer living in the house.
In conclusion, quite nights in your bed without any disturbance from the neighbors from the other side of the wall and possibility to have different activities outside the building have more advantages for the persons who respect calm and healthy life. Thus I prefer to live in my own house 10-20 kilometers from the town. There is a positive trend which shows that people are moving from the crowded towns to the countryside houses and this tendency will be definitely extended to the nearest future.
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Просьба проверить мое эссе. У меня большая проблема - не могу уложиться в 40 минут и получается слишком много слов. Как можно сократить эссе?
Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
The modern lifestyle allows us to choose where to live. Some people think that there are more advantages to live in the house but at the same time others claim that living in an apartment is more suitable for people. As for me, I agree that living in a house has more advantages compared with living in a block of flats. This will be analyzed by providing pros and cons of abovementioned statement.
First advantage is that in the house you do not have neighbors above or below your flat. For instance, friend of mine who is living in the apartment complained several months ago that his neighbors from the flat under him like to listen to the music loudly during the night. He asked them to not doing this and even called to the police several times but without any help. This example clearly shows that the family living in the separate house will definitely not have any troubles with noisy neighbors just from the other side of the wall. Quietness is a main reason why people prefer to live in the house.
The second advantage is that usually each separate house has its own land where you can spend a lot of time outside the room with activities such as sunbathing, cooking the meal, playing with children and pets, growing flowers. According to the survey, people who spend 4-5 hours on the nature each day have the better health in comparison with those who spend time mostly in the apartments. There are no doubts that people who live in the house with the garden have the chance to spend their time closer to the nature and this is the main reason why people prefer living in the house.
In conclusion, quite nights in your bed without any disturbance from the neighbors from the other side of the wall and possibility to have different activities outside the building have more advantages for the persons who respect calm and healthy life. Thus I prefer to live in my own house 10-20 kilometers from the town. There is a positive trend which shows that people are moving from the crowded towns to the countryside houses and this tendency will be definitely extended to the nearest future.
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