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Your 2nd body para and you conclusion do not correspond to the task.
I don't know how you're preparing for your IELTS test, I mean whether you're doing it on your own or with a tutor, but you really need to pay close attention to this problem and fix it a.s.a.p.
Otherwise, your English is pretty sound.
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