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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world the competition is very high. Even in childhood children need to compete with each other. The argument that a sence of competition in children should be encouraged is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Firstly, it is easy to see that the sooner a child understands what competition is, the more success he will reach. For example, classmates who have showen themselves as excellent pupils at school, get better opportunities in their future. Because of this, it is easy to see why the argument that children’s competition should be encouraged by parents and teachers has garnered support
However, on the other side of this argument, it must be rememberd that the other side of competition is co-operation. For example, it is known that a team can do significantly more than their members separately. Thus, this makes it clear why the argument that cooperation should be encouraged from childhood is also supported by many people.
In summary, both sides of the argument regarding the encouragment some specific qualities in children have strong support. However, after analyzing both points of view it is clear that only the mix of competition and co-operation leads to success. As such, it is clear that nowadays a person cannot successfully compete with a team, but this team have to compete with other group of people. Thus, parents and teachers should encourage competition and co-operation at the same time.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today’s world the competition is very high. Even in childhood children need to compete with each other. The argument that a sence of competition in children should be encouraged is a subject that is both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this argument will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
Firstly, it is easy to see that the sooner a child understands what competition is, the more success he will reach. For example, classmates who have showen themselves as excellent pupils at school, get better opportunities in their future. Because of this, it is easy to see why the argument that children’s competition should be encouraged by parents and teachers has garnered support
However, on the other side of this argument, it must be rememberd that the other side of competition is co-operation. For example, it is known that a team can do significantly more than their members separately. Thus, this makes it clear why the argument that cooperation should be encouraged from childhood is also supported by many people.
In summary, both sides of the argument regarding the encouragment some specific qualities in children have strong support. However, after analyzing both points of view it is clear that only the mix of competition and co-operation leads to success. As such, it is clear that nowadays a person cannot successfully compete with a team, but this team have to compete with other group of people. Thus, parents and teachers should encourage competition and co-operation at the same time.
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